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Dreamscape - A little less than a happy high
komos
komos
Dreamscape
a story told from first person perspective until its climax, at which point the narrrative utterly unravels and preconceptions are shredded

male:female shift

vampire in the piano

mad disabled

what's the significance of finding a new cat? why is it the trigger

house on a hill; mountains appear, but link is shaky

"I only hope someone will see fit to take care of my baby." dead mother, dead fetus, both undergo autopsies


This is just to hold space for something I think I need to record. Hopefully I won't lose too much of it before I can flesh it out.
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From: missmelysse Date: June 23rd, 2005 10:06 am (UTC) (Link)
I immediately latched onto "vampire in the piano" because I began writing a vampire story last night (with much thanks to KLAE for inspiring the plot).

Your place-holders are fun. Intriguing.
komos From: komos Date: June 23rd, 2005 10:53 am (UTC) (Link)
The dream left an unpleasant taste when I woke up. It was a vampire story, except not.
From: corvus_coronis Date: June 23rd, 2005 10:21 am (UTC) (Link)
Hope you get it all down. I waited too many days to record my last dream & now most of it has slipped.
komos From: komos Date: June 23rd, 2005 10:50 am (UTC) (Link)
The key was remembering "mad disabled." Both terms were eluding me after I got up, but things fell into place when I forced them into my rational brain.

I can't really make sense of this one though. The narrative is convoluted and cinematic, and there are lot's of Huh? moments.
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