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A little less than a happy high
Redundancy (v.1)
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sinspired From: sinspired Date: July 15th, 2005 02:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heh. I think the issue with III is a size continuity issue. After II, our eyes want to keep moving smaller and smaller down the page and, well, they just can't.
komos From: komos Date: July 15th, 2005 02:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
Really, I'd like them to be set up so:



It wouldn't resolve the descent issue (IV is a very heavy shot), but it would mitigate the shocking color a little.
From: missmelysse Date: July 15th, 2005 02:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think the "shocking color" of III works in your favor, actually, making the faded sign in IV that much more weathered and worn.
komos From: komos Date: July 15th, 2005 02:57 pm (UTC) (Link)

I was thinking more of the muted tones in II going to the rather violent shades of pink in III. There's something dissonant there that doesn't flow quite like I want it to.
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